Week 4 Story (IN PORTFOLIO)

This Story is Also in my Portfolio Tales told by a Bookworm

There were once three best friends, Emma, Maggie, and Joe.  They grew up together, and were inseparable.   However, as they grew older, Maggie and Joe fell in love. 

One day, Emma came up to them and asked them to cover for her.  She told them that she was seeing a married guy, and she didn’t want his wife finding out.  She asked them to be a lookout when she went on dates with him, and if they saw his wife, they were to stall her until the both Emma and her boyfriend could get away.  Because they were old friends, Maggie and Joe agreed to this. 
This arrangement went on for a while.  Eventually, the wife figured out what Maggie and Joe were doing for their friend.  In a fit of anger, she revealed herself to be Juno, the most powerful goddess on mount Olympus.  She told them that they were keeping her from her love, Zeus(the married man who is dating Emma), and for their crime, they shall never be together again. 

Joe and Maggie woke up on opposite ends of a large field.  Seeing each other, they started walking toward each other.  However, they closer they got, the less they were able to move.  Their arms got heavy and stiff, their feet started dragging, and their movements were slower.  They noticed that the other was starting to look more and more like a statue.  When they were about ten feet apart, they stopped, afraid to go further.  They called out to one another, trying to figure out what to do next. They decided to try moving away from each other.  As they moved backwards, it became easier to move, and when they were around thirty feet apart they were back to normal.  Juno appeared in the middle of the field, between them. She laughed, saying that they were cursed.  If they were to ever get close together again, they would both turn completely to stone. 

Maggie and Joe decided that they should try living apart.  It was the only way to stay alive.  For a few years they did this.  Every so often, they would feel their limbs get stiff; knowing the other was nearby, they would walk off with heavy hearts in the other direction.  Eventually they started to have conversations with each other, while still having to be great distances apart.  One day, they could not stand it any longer.  They started running toward each other, arms ready to wrap in an embrace.  They stopped in the middle, both turned completely to stone, an inch apart.

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The Kiss, Source: Wikimedia Commons

Author's Note:  I based this story off of three storied from Ovid's Metamorphoses.  The idea to have two characters tragically be apart was from Pyramus and Thisbe.  That story was about two people falling in love, however, their families hated each other.  Due to a tragic misunderstanding, one assumed the other was dead, killed himself, causing the other to kill herself once she found out what he had done.  The idea to have Juno curse them came from the story of Echo.  Echo was a nymph that used to cover for her friends while they were with Zeus by keeping Juno distracted.  When Juno found out what Echo did, she cursed her to only be able to repeat what someone else was saying.  I got the idea to turn Joe and Maggie into stone came from Deucalion and Pyrrha.  Due to a large flood, Deucalion and Pyrrha were the only people left on Earth.  They appealed to a goddess about this, who told them to throw large boulders over their shoulders.  When the boulders hit the ground, they changed from rocks into people, and the human race was saved.  The picture that I chose also helped influence the story.  This is a rather famous statue, and while you cannot see it in this angle of the photo, the couple's lips are just barely apart, forever in that moment right before the kiss.  I thought it represented the end of my story well. 

Comments

  1. The original story sounds a lot like Romeo and Juliet, but your story really intrigues me. Your descriptions are detailed and it makes me feel really bad for Joe and Maggie. The story is tragic, but it is really creative. I am glad that you stay true to Ovid's Metamorphosis and write this story. The picture you use also matches the story really well. Thank you for sharing and great job!

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  2. I really loved this whole story. It was very well written and different from the other stories I’ve read! I really liked how you used a few different stories as your inspiration! I hadn’t thought of that, but I may try it next week! I thought it was interesting that you did a sort of flip of the story of Deucalion and Pyrrha, so that the people became stone instead the other way around. Did you write the story based off of a previous knowledge of the statue? Because if you did that is so creative! If you were revising this story, maybe you could consider what happened to Emma? I’d be interested to see what you wrote about how Juno decides to punish her for seeing her husband, and how you could maybe pull that from another story within Metamorphoses or from somewhere else within the scope of Greek mythology.

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    1. I did write this story with the statue in mind. I learned about the statue in a fine arts class, and I always had a similar back story for the statue in my head. I had not considered expanding the story and explaining what had happened to Emma. That is a really good idea. There are many stories of Juno seeking revenge on Zeus's partners, so it would be a fun story to continue.

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  3. Great story! I hadn't read this story before, so wasn't prepared for the Greek gods to show up! haha, but still well done. The combining of multiple stories was a great idea! The ending was so sad, but I could only imagine what happened to Emma after Juno found out. And it is completely believable that Zeus is cheating again. So great characterization. I guess the moral of the story is to chose your friends wisely.

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  4. This is such a good story Kathleen! I absolutely loved how you tied all three stories together, and you did it flawlessly! I'm not going to lie I am a sucker for a happy ending, and this definitely was not it! But it still was a really good story and really goes to show you should pick your friends wisely! As everyone's parents always say: "you are the company you keep"! I think that the statue you chose was really cool too and fit the story perfectly! At least Maggie and Joe at least sort of ended up together in the end! Great Job!

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