Story Week 10: The Tale of Brita
I will tell you a tale about the land of Faeries. This is a time of magic. In this land there lived a Duke and his
daughter, Brita. Brita was an only
child. Because of this, her father provided
her the best schooling and training that he could, both in how to be a lady of
the court and how to be a knight. Brita
spent many years training to be the best fighter in the land. However, she never had any interest in going
on quests.
One day, Brita was poking around the vast library in her
home. She found an old, dusty book labeled “Prophecies.” Intrigued, she opened the book up to the
table of contents. She scanned the
chapters until she saw one that said “True Love.”
“This could be interesting,” she thought, and, ignoring the
warning label next to the title of the book, she flipped to the “True Love”
chapter.
She picked a prophecy at random and started reading outloud;
“Your true love is close at hand,
You must travel to another land.
Rescue your love from the glass,
To find where they are you need only ask.
In three weeks’ time you have to spend,
Before your love meets an untimely end.”
When she finished reading, the book snapped shut and the
warning label started to glow red. It said,
“BEWARE: What is read aloud is set in stone!
You have claimed this prophecy as your own!”
“WHAT?!” Brita shrieked, “This can’t apply to me, it is an anonymous
prophecy!”
She flipped back to the prophecy and underneath it now read,
“Brita’s Prophecy”
“Shoot,” she thought, “If I don’t go on this quest, then
this person might die. But how do I find where they are?”
Brita looked at the words, “just ask.” Hesitantly, she asked aloud, “Where do I find
the person from the prophecy?”
“Malesata probably has him,” said a voice behind her. Brita turned around to find herself staring
at an owl.
“Who are you?” asked Brita.
“I am Pheobus, Merlin’s most trusted owl. He left me here with his prophecy book to
answer the questions of the foolish mortals to decide to read from the
book. Your love is probably being held
by Malecasta. You must endure many tests
on your journey to her castle.”
“But what if I don’t want to go,” Brita wailed, “I don’t want
to have to leave my home.”
“Well tough,” said Pheobus, “maybe you should read the warning
next time. Because you read this, there
is now a person trapped and you must save them.”
“But I can’t do this on my own! Can you come with me?”
Pheobus begrudgingly looked at Brita and said, “All right, I
should probably go to make sure that you don’t do anything foolish again.”
Brita and Pheobus packed for their journey, and headed out
to Malecasta’s castle. Her father never
heard from her again, and to this day her family wonders what became of
Brita.
Owl with book by mimooh.svg, Source: Wikimedia Commons
Author’s Note: I took
elements of this story from the tales of Britomart. In the stories, Britomart is very brave and valiant. In this story, I wanted to give Brita the
same training, but she is not looking forward to the prospect of a quest. I changed the magic mirror in the story into
a prophecy book, because I thought that it would be more fun to write about. The owl tales the place of Britomart’s nanny,
who takes the place of her squire on their journey. The never seeing Brita again thing came from
the end of the Britomart stories where she lost her friend Lady Amoret and they
never saw her again.
Hi! I liked your story and how you changed the magic mirror prophecy book. You did a great job with the details and dialogue. I think it would have ben interesting to add a little bit of detail on what happen after her journey and her father never saw her again.
ReplyDeleteHello Kathleen!
ReplyDeleteYour story was so cute and entertaining. So because she read the text she trapped someone? What bad luck that person must have so just at one moment be living life and the next trapped for no reason at all. What exactly did happen to Brita? Overall good job on your story! I just wish it wouldn’t have ended suddenly.
Hey there, Kathleen!
ReplyDeleteI thought this story was really sad and funny at the same time. I liked your use of the owl and its blunt humor. It was definitely a bit unfortunate for Brita to be stuck with a prophecy when she had no idea that it would become reality. I felt a bit sad for her there. However, I guess she should not have been poking around. The owl said it best.
Hi Kathleen!
ReplyDeleteI was not prepared for the ending of this story. It was good, don't get me wrong, but I was over here thinking maybe her dad had gotten captured and she had to rescue him or something! I'm not sure that I like the open ending, but it's really cool that each person who reads this story can decide for themselves what happens to Brita!